At an army training camp in Florida, the Seargent is giving a talk: "The main quality we look for in this army is commitment and this is what I call commitment." An alligator came in the room and bit the seargents penis. It stayed there for about a 10 seconds then the seargent poked it in the eyes and kicked it off.
"Now who's ready to show their commitment?" said the Seargent. A man put his hand up and said "I will, but promise you won't poke me in the eyes."
thank you for that hint. I have done the proposed correction.
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1 year ago
you should have a comma betweenflorida and seargent because it is on sentence. it should read, "At an army training camp in Florida, the Seargent is giving a talk." instead of "At an army training camp in Florida. The Seargent is giving a talk."
At an army training camp in Florida, the Seargent is giving a talk: "The main quality we look for in this army is commitment and this is what I call commitment." An alligator came in the room and bit the seargents penis. It stayed there for about a 10 seconds then the seargent poked it in the eyes and kicked it off.
thank you for that hint. I have done the proposed correction.
you should have a comma betweenflorida and seargent because it is on sentence. it should read, "At an army training camp in Florida, the Seargent is giving a talk." instead of "At an army training camp in Florida. The Seargent is giving a talk."